Are these good rap lyrics?

Please don't get mad at my answer, it's just my opinion. I think those lyrics are very clever and thoughtful (and hopefully true) but im not sure it would go well at all with a beat. But im not going to take my time to try to make a beat to go to those lyrics (that's your job) so I don't know if it would or wouldn't work. But other than that I like it a lot./